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Course Description

  • Global History and Geography is a two-year required course of study

  • Traditionally,  students take the two year course beginning in the 9th grade.  At the end of their sophomore year, students take the New York State Regents Exam

  • The course examines the history of the world beginning with the dawn of civilization (10,000 BCE) up to the present day

  • Churchville-Chili has organized the course using a chronological format with a focus on major historical themes.

 

 

 

New York State Regents Exam 

Part I - Multiple Choice

  • Part I of the Regents exam is 50 multiple choice questions

  • These questions span both the 9th and 10th grade years

  • Approximately 60% of these questions will come from modern history or material from the 10th grade year

  • Questions will include interpreting primary source documents, maps, charts, political cartoons and statistical information

  • Part I is worth 55% of the exam grade

 

New York State Regents Exam 

Part II - Thematic Essay  

  • Part II is a thematic essay question

  • Every student is posed the same essay question that focuses on a particular theme, however each student may choose to use different examples and details to illustrate their answers

  • Students are expected to include an introductory paragraph with a focus or thesis statement, several body paragraphs and a concluding paragraph

  • Past themes have included...

    • Science and Technology

    • Geography 

    • Change

    • Conflict

    • Economic Change

    • Change - Turning Points

    • Geography and Society

  • Part II is worth 15% of the exam grade

 

New York State Regents Exam 

Part III - Document Based Question (DBQ)

  • Part III is a document based question (DBQ) and has two components

    • Part III-A or "DBQ scaffolding" is a series of short answer questions based on primary source documents 

    • Part III-B is the DBQ essay questions

  • Similar to the thematic essay, every student is posed the same essay question, however each student may choose to use different examples and details to illustrate their response

  • Students are expected to include an introductory paragraph with a focus or thesis statement, several body paragraphs and a concluding paragraph

  • It is best practice for students to use complete sentences when answering the scaffolding question in Part III-A

  • Students are expected to incorporate their own outside information as well as evidence and details from the documents

  • Part III-A, "the scaffolding" is worth 15% of the exam grade

  • Part III-B, the DBQ Essay, is worth 15% of the exam grade

 

  

 

 

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Essay Help

Below are some helpful hints and strategies for tackling the Global History and Geography Essays.  You will find the themes defined, pre-writing strategies, essay components, rubric descriptions and model essays.  Spend the time to review this section.  It will be well worth it!

 

What Exactly is a "THEME" for the thematic essays?

  • The following is a list of historical themes or topics that are universal.  That is, their historical existence expands all cultures and regions of the world.
  • Students should have a strong understanding of each of these themes.    
  • The Regents Exam Essay Questions will provide students with one of these themes to write about.   
  • Students are expected to compose an essay using several accurate detailed examples from history to illustrate the theme.

 

BELIEF SYSTEMS: The established, orderly ways in which groups or individuals look at religious faith or philosophical ideas.
CHANGE / TURNING POINTS: The basic alteration in things, events and ideas.
CHOICE: The right or power to select from a range of alternatives.
CONFLICT: Disagreement or opposition between ideas or groups, which may lead to an armed struggle.
DIVERSITY: Understanding and respecting others and oneself, including any similarities or differences in language, gender, socioeconomic class, religion, and other human characteristics and traits.
IMPERIALISM: The domination by one country of the political and/or economic life of another country or region.
INTERDEPENDENCE: Reliance upon others in mutually beneficial interactions and exchanges.
MOVEMENT OF PEOPLE & GOODS: The exchange of people, ideas, products, technologies, and institutions from one region or civilizations to another (a process that has existed throughout history)
NATIONALISM: A feeling of pride in and devotion to one's country or the desire of people to control their own government, free from foreign interference or rule.  Unifying bonds may include a people's common language, religion, history, culture, ethnicity or territory.
URBANIZATION: Movement of people from rural to urban (city) areas.
SCARCITY: The conflict between unlimited needs and want and limited natural and human resources.
SCIENCE & TECHNOLOGY: The tools and methods used by people to get what they need and want.
HUMAN RIGHTS: Those basic political, economic, and social rights by which all human beings are entitled, such as the right to life, liberty, security of person, and a standard of living adequate for the health and well-being of oneself and one's family.
JUSTICE: Fair, equal, proportional, or appropriate treatment rendered to individuals in interpersonal, societal, or government interactions.
POWER: The ability of people to compel or influence the actions of others.  Legitimate, or rightful, power is called authority.
GEOGRAPHY: The physical environment including climate, landforms, vegetation, elevation, waterways, natural resources and their impact on human movement, settlement and culture.

 

Step by Step Guide for Writing a 

Global History Thematic Essay

Step 1   Pre-writing Planning - Think it Through!

  • Read the task or question
  • Read the task again
  • Turn the essay "Task" into your essay focus statement (thesis)
  • HINT:  Students may restate the thematic background statement, but should attempt to do so in their own words
  • Make sure you fully understand what the essay is looking for

Example from the June 2002 Exam...

 

 

 

 

 

 

Step 2  Make a Written Plan

  • Make an outline, block, list or a graphic organizer like a web to BRAINSTORM
  • This is a critical part of tackling the essay.  Many students make the MISTAKE of skipping this step!
  • Commit 5 or 10 minutes for this step.  It is time well spent.
  • You will be awarded points for the ACCURATE details you provide.
  • Common mistakes include the use of incorrect information  or use of inaccurate examples that don't support the theme.
  • GET WHAT YOU ALREADY KNOW DOWN ON PAPER FIRST
  • Include OUTSIDE information here to illustrate the theme further.

Example of Scrap Paper - Planning 

Geography and Society

People change their geography...AFFECTS on society...

geography is climate, landforms, waterways, resources...environment...

GOOD>more trade...more jobs...progress...sharing ideas...diffusion...interdependence?...

BAD>pollution...overcrowding...loss of resources...?

EXAMPLES....??...

1)  Peter the Great...westernization...St. Petersburg...access to warm water port...drained swamps...Russia's economy stronger...modernize...trade...

2)  Japan...terrace farming...island..archepelego...no land to farm...build up!!...cut steps into mountainside to grow crops...

3) Canals...suez, panama...man made waterway to connect larger waters... for trade...millions of $$...faster travel...goods and ideas...diffusion...

4) mesopotamia...irrigation systems...tigris euphrates....grow crops... more people...crowded in fertile areas

5)Rainforest...deforestation...make room for railways and farmland and towns...loss of wildlife...ozone, greenhouse effect...

6)Great Britain and industrial revolution...urbanization...coal, iron ore, cotton...textiles...water power and steam power...pollution and overcrowded cities..dangorous work in mines to extract resources....

 

THESIS...

History has shown that human activity has often changed the land people live on.  Quite often, the changes to the physical geography has had both positive and negative impact on society.

 

 

Step 3  Write the Introductory Paragraph

  • The introductory paragraph needs to include a THESIS STATEMENT or focus statement
  • HINT:  Students may restate the thematic background statement, but should attempt to do so in their own words
  • The paragraph should be a minimum of 5 sentences
  • Include general examples and relevant outside information
  • HINT:  define the theme in the intro
  • CAUTION:  do NOT go into any detail for your examples...save this for the body paragraphs

Example of an introductory paragraph -  Writing

      History has shown that human activity has often changed the land people live on.  Quite often, the changes to the physical geography has had both positive and negative impact on society.  From ancient times to the modern day, geography and society have worked together to meet the needs and want of humanity.  Geography may include landforms, waterways, natural resources or climate.  Examples of humanity's altering of their geography include ancient Egypt and their intricate irrigation systems, the Japanese use of terrace farming, Peter the Great's construction of his "window to the west", St. Petersburg and the construction of the Panama and Suez Canals.  Two examples worth examining further include Great Britain's use of natural resources during the industrial revolution and a second example includes the deforestation process surrounding the Amazon basin in Brazil.  Human progress will often alter the environment at a cost.

     

Step 4  Write the Essay Body Paragraphs

  • Include a minimum of 2 fact filled body paragraphs
  • Begin the paragraph with a TOPIC SENTENCE;  that is a sentence that simple states what the paragraph is about
  • Use the Essay Question "Task" as your guide of what to include within the paragraph
  • Depending on the essay question, body paragraphs will often discuss the following categories
    • positive and negative effects
    • similarities and differences 
    • causes and effects
    • political, economic or social traits

Step 5  Write a Essay Conclusion

  • Restate the Theme of the essay
  • Include a sentence for each body paragraph that references the theme and content
  • Conclusion should be a minimum of 3 sentences

 

June 2002 Model Essay:  Geography and Society

HINT:  More model essays can be found within the "Past Regents Exams" link.  Just go to the answer keys.

 

 

Step by Step Guide for Writing a 

Global History Document Based Essay

Approach the DBQ a similar way that you approach the Thematic Essay.  The DBQ adds the step of analyzing historical documents, therefore we will have access to lots of specific historical details. 

Step 1   Pre-writing Planning - Think it Through!

  • Read the task or question
  • Read the task again
  • Begin thinking on how to turn the essay "Task" into your essay focus statement (thesis)
  • HINT:  Students may restate the thematic background statement, but should attempt to do so in their own words
  • Using a highlighter can help identify key words and phrases
  • Make sure you fully understand what the DBQ Essay is looking for

Example from the June 2003 Exam...

 

Step 2  Make a Written Plan

  • Make an outline, block, list or a graphic organizer like a web to BRAINSTORM
  • This is a critical part of tackling the essay.  Many students make the MISTAKE of skipping this step!
  • Commit 5 or 10 minutes for this step.  It is time well spent.
  • Look for "buckets" or "categories" to help organize your essay.
  • You will be awarded points for the ACCURATE details you provide.
  • Common mistakes include the use of incorrect information  or use of inaccurate examples that don't support the theme.
  • GET WHAT YOU ALREADY KNOW DOWN ON PAPER FIRST
  • Include OUTSIDE information here to illustrate the theme further.

Example of Scrap Paper - Planning

NOTE:  Outside info is listed first...then the details from the documents second 

Change / Turning Points

Neolithic Revolution

OUTSIDE INFO

- dawn of civilization

- no more wandering, hunting and gathering

-leads to settlements, need for laws, institutions

-farming...

MOSTLY POSITIVE +

...more secure source of food, steady growth, 

 

 

 

 

 

DOCUMENT HELP...

DOC 1, timeline

domesticatio of animals, food source

DOC 2, dialogue...food source

DOC 3  ???NOT SURE???

 

Age of Exploration

OUTSIDE INFO

-from stagnant feudalistic settlements to massive amounts of cultural diffusion

-cultures come together...interdependence

-independent societies living separated...no contact

POSITIVE AND NEGATIVE

POSITIVE contact allows more trade, $$$$, goods and ideas exchanged

NEGATIVE

disease, foreign domination, brutality, no respect for other cultures, slavery...

 

DOCUMENT HELP...

DOC 4, MAP of trade routes

DOC 5,  population shifts...CULTURAL DIFFUSION

DOC 6  --SLAVERY population...

Collapse of Communism/USSR

OUTSIDE INFO

1990's, end of the Cold War

-gorbachev...perestroika...glastnost

-US vs. Ussr conflict ends

-capitalism and democracy have a greater influence

POSITIVE

democracy, freedom, Berlin Wall comes down, unity

less Nuclear war threat..?..

 

 

 

 

 

DOCUMENT HELP...

DOC 7 gorby's policies explained

DOC , 8  NOT SURE HERE?? policy

DOC 9  cartoons...shortages and multi ethnic breakup..nationalism  end of one problem seems to start another...

 

Step 3  Document Analysis - Scaffolding

  • Carefully read the questions attached to each document a couple of times
  • Then carefully read the document a couple of times
  • Take notes in the MARGINS as you go.  These could highlight things like
  • positives and negatives
  • similarities / differences
  • political, social economic traits
  • causes / effects
  • Highlighting the document will help identify key words, phrases, themes and details
  • Develop your answer using your highlighted text, margin notes and document analysis
  • Complete sentences are best to get your point across.
  • REMEMBER... the scaffolding points are weighted as much as the DBQ essay
  • Go to your scrap paper and jot notes from each document that can support your essay

Step 4  Write the Introductory Paragraph

  • The introductory paragraph needs to include a THESIS STATEMENT or focus statement
  • HINT:  Students may restate the thematic background statement, but should attempt to do so in their own words
  • The paragraph should be a minimum of 5 sentences
  • Include general examples and relevant outside information
  • HINT:  define the theme in the intro
  • CAUTION:  do NOT go into any detail for your examples...save this for the body paragraphs

 

Step 5  Write the Essay Body Paragraphs

  • Include a minimum of 2 fact filled body paragraphs
  • Begin the paragraph with a TOPIC SENTENCE;  that is a sentence that simple states what the paragraph is about
  • Use the Essay Question "Task" as your guide of what to include within the paragraph
  • Depending on the essay question, body paragraphs will often discuss the following categories or "buckets"
    • positive and negative effects
    • similarities and differences 
    • causes and effects
    • political, economic or social traits
  • Use parenthetical citation after a sentence to reference the documents  ie.  (doc. #4)
  • Use a majority of the documents within the essay
  • Constantly reference the Essay Task to make sure you are keeping the essay focused
  • Weave the outside information along with the document details.  YOU NEED BOTH!

 

Step 6  Write a Essay Conclusion

  • Restate the Theme of the essay
  • Include a sentence for each body paragraph that references the theme and content
  • Conclusion should be a minimum of 3 sentences

SPECIAL NOTES....

  • Proof-read your essay.
  • Avoid listing summaries of the documents.  This would sound like  "In document 1, it says...   In document 2 its says...Finally, in document 4 it says..."
  • Avoid using 1st person pronouns.  This would sound like... "In this essay I will clearly show you that..."
  • Avoid using abbreviated terms especially those often used on Instant Messenger.  This would sound like..."...+ Slavery was bad b/c, ya know...the gov't..."

 

 

Document Based Question Checklist / Feedback 

Use the questions below to complete a review of an DBQ essay process..

1.  How many times are the documents cited?

2.  List the documents numbers used in the essay.

3.  Identify a topic sentence from one of the body paragraphs by writing it below.

4.  Is it too general or too specific? And why?

5.  List 2 examples of outside information used within the document.

6.  Identify the thesis by writing it below.

7.  Identify the categories or "buckets" used to answer the essay question.

8.  Identify an example of paraphrasing by writing an example below.

9.  List 3 details used within one of the body paragraphs.

10. List 3 adjectives, which describes the essay.

11. List 3 specific ways to improve the essay.

12. Yes or No Are there margin notes found within the documents?

13. % of block / planning completed?

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